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<rss version="2.0"><channel><title>Lake Neuron - Latest Comments in Dropping out</title><link>http://lakeneuron.disqus.com/</link><description>John I. Carney's home on the web</description><language>en</language><lastBuildDate>Mon, 07 Nov 2005 22:20:04 -0000</lastBuildDate><item><title>Re: Dropping out</title><link>http://lakeneuron.com/2005/11/07/dropping-out/#comment-1223818</link><description>Good!  Now you can get to work rewriting the novel you wrote last year!</description><dc:creator xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/">Georganna Hancock</dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 07 Nov 2005 22:20:04 -0000</pubDate></item><item><title>Re: Dropping out</title><link>http://lakeneuron.com/2005/11/07/dropping-out/#comment-1223817</link><description>&lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/redirect?link_code=ur2&amp;amp;camp=1789&amp;amp;tag=petegallssoul-20&amp;amp;creative=9325&amp;amp;path=external-search%3Fsearch-type=ss%26keyword=robert%20mckee%20story%26index=blended" rel="nofollow"&gt;Story&lt;/a&gt;, to see his treatment of dialogue.  It's screenwriting, but as I mentioned in the email, the way he pulled apart the scene from &lt;i&gt;Chinatown&lt;/i&gt; was some of the most exciting writing I've ever encountered.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;February's another month too.  A good one for a contest to create the most horrible "History of St. Valentine's Day" story.  I have an old one - from a time when singleness had me about ready to drive into a bridge embutment - I'd enter.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;March is good too.  And April.  And before you know it, you'll be able to do November again.</description><dc:creator xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/">Pete Gall</dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 07 Nov 2005 19:10:48 -0000</pubDate></item></channel></rss>